Open Poetry #40 |
March |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. The first Warm light Through an un-shuttered window Reflects off a silent mirror Unto the opposite wall It is her A moment Pausing on her way Across the room Spring Radiant In her hair One almost expects Still even now To hear the call Perhaps a sigh To see her turn Finally One hand beckoning You beside her As she goes . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is such a gentle read...needs to go back up....bump |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Beautifully done, as always... I so admire the elegant style of your writing. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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