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Open Poetry #40

Feeling Tomorrow

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-03-08 09:10 PM

Feeling Tomorrow

My goodness she
sure looked cute,
pushing her cart
in Safeway in her high
heals and her sharkskin suit.
I tried not to
catch her eye,
still I did,
and as I wondered why,
she found herself asking me
if she could come
over tonight,
and I told her no,
so she said that she
would be free to come
over in the morning,
to heat up some toast and eggs,
and again I said no,
so she said allright,
then I suppose its
goodnight sweetheart
and then she turned and
walked away,
and as I watched
her walking away
I had nothing
left to say.
Still I wondered how
I would feel
in the morning.

JamesLee
07March
2007

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

1 posted 2007-04-24 01:56 AM

This is a Good one!!!!!!!!!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-24 12:33 PM

oh! beautiful for a unilateral care.
I love to read this story like but it has quite lot of meaning in it.

enjoyed.

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