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James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27
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0 posted 2007-03-08 03:55 PM


A MICKLE OF BIRDS,

A MUCKLE OF FEET,

HUDDLED TOGETHER,

TOO HIGH UP TO REACH,

SQUAWKING AND SKREAKING,

SNAPPING THEIR BEAKS,

WATCHING THE WORLD,

THAT TRAVELS BENEATH.
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Sadelite
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1 posted 2007-03-08 06:27 PM

Very cool writing!  I love the rhythm in this!

Sadie
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2 posted 2007-03-10 11:08 AM

reminds me of a Shel Silverstein poem

I like it!
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