(Let me know what you think and I need a title for it please)

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Open Poetry #40

(Let me know what you think and I need a title for it please)

James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 83

0 posted 2007-03-08 03:40 PM

(Please review this poem, and suggest a title for me)

You will come for me,

Of that I am sure,

You will hunt me down,

Till I can hide no more.

I will surrender my body,

Like I`ve done so before,

But you`ll never have my heart,

Its mine...,

Not yours!

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

1 posted 2007-03-08 05:16 PM

The Cardiologist & Her Dog

Head Cheese & Chicken Feet

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-03-10 11:06 AM

"Halfway" or "Half Giving In"

I'm not very good with titles

sounds like an issue I face sometimes for sure

~Death Reaper~
New Member

since 2007-03-10

Posts 4

3 posted 2007-03-10 04:09 PM

Honestly, I think you should think of a name when you are completly done with it.

In the dark you were my light,
a little dim, and yet so bright.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-03-10 09:00 PM

How about "Layla's Fool"...using that name for no particular reason...James

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