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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Paint I paint a painting of my mind My palette shows a mystic mix Each dab I dab is fixed in kind To light the object I would fix I hum a tune this state of swoon This hand that marks the canvas face I paint the magic of the moon With sliver shards of loving lace The surface shows a mass of swirl A picture of a path of lights They whirl and curl the color pearl Showing lights within the whites Dancing in a colors dance They dance into your living space They place your mind within a trance And weave you in a dreamers trace A touch of dreamer’s nuance Painted from a wiles enhance |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And I say ... get those pictures you DID paint up there on Photobucket, and let the world in here see them Sy. This man can not only paint in poetry, but he is an accomplished artist I have to tell you. The black/white sketch you sent me ended up in my son's office beautifully framed, will have to send you a picture if I remember. It is the word, "remember" that I have trouble with these days m'friend.  Lovely verse. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I hum a tune this state of swoon This hand that marks the canvas face I paint the magic of the moon With sliver shards of loving lace" Aha! You actually paint on canvas as well!? Cat's out of the bag now dear Seymour. Yes..indeed post one of your paintings with a poem. I know we would all love to see one! Pleeeease.  &  , Nancy~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are a gracious lady and If it weren't for the fact I can't keep up with this technical age I would do it. The older I get the further away all these new facilities seem to get. I think I need a sharp new assistant to help me do all the things I want. Thank you for the lovely reply.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy As I said to Sharon I would need a sharp assistant to help me do what you ask. This new technology has gotten far beyond me. But I do appreciate your comment. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can do it Sy! Pick me...pick me!  I know how to do it! LOL  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The surface shows a mass of swirl A picture of a path of lights They whirl and curl the color pearl Showing lights within the whites love the image...besides, pearls are my birthstone... M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Send them all to me in email I will get it going for you on Photobucket Sy - be more than glad to be the "Dragon's Assistant." LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy? I took a moment to read some of the replies, I don't know why, but I did... and it makes me think that we need to have some of your wonderful art on display. If someone can take some close ups photos of your art...it would be my treat to help you display them, if you wish. Because you are an artist not only of word, but brush.... and this, I know. Look at all of the assistants you have recruited! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I paint the magic of the moon With sliver shards of loving lace Sheer beauty. Lovely. A |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
what can I say, My spirit will rise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding write! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this poem has danced into my living space and now I desire to see your paintings too |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've been privileged to see photographs of a few of your paintings... and blessed to read your poems. You, sir, are an artist with keen eye and beautiful heart. *S* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Have not got chance to read all you poems. This one is so gooooood. You not only can write chaos and time, rhyme chaos and time but also can paint chaos and time. oh, life...wonderful life. have a nice day! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I paint the magic of the moon With sliver shards of loving lace' Indeed, indeed ! I, too, have seen photos of some of Sy's paintngs ... he is as adept a painter as he is a poet !! AND THAT'S GOING SOME !!!  There are many here that would LOVE to see your artwork, Seymour~ PURTY PWEEZE ... share~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Great writing as always. Enjoyed. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Steve. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Bravo Maestro Seymour! This is simply fantastic poetry! And I agree that somebody should help you get the pictures of your paintings in here, so that we can admire them too! You are a wonderful artist! Love and hugs. Bravissimo! Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You are a dear, thank you. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this is amazingly beautiful and it flows so sweetly and effortlessly. such a joy to read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paullallady A very sweet reply, thank you. |
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fader New Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 1Ontario, Canada |
Your poem was a real pleasure to read! The rhyme was excellent and the syllable count was right on. I look forward to reading more from you. Nothing gold can stay |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
fader I thank you kindly. |
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