Picky, Picky, Picky .....................

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Open Poetry #40

Picky, Picky, Picky .....................

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-03-07 12:48 PM

         nothing is sweeter

than standing next to her heater

      if i could complete her

maybe she'd show me the money

why can't i go meet her and sign a contract worth millions

  we could split up the honey

but i'm supposed to delete her

at least that's the opinion of billions

what if watching episodes of Monk with someone i don't love is neater

            than writing?

                                                              love,

                                                              howard

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2007-03-10 11:10 AM

Howard, sometimes your writing is cute the way you rhyme but I can't get this one

I think you have more potential

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

2 posted 2007-03-10 04:57 PM

i think i could work on her rhythm a little bit

i borrowed a few lines from Jerry Maguire to improve the wit

and i couldn't resist calling on Monk's help to get her to sit

with me

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