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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Cinder from a block glass slipper on a foot if a sister could be so happy as to meet a prince ones that rides white stallions fairytale tell me more about how the wicked work with such strength and live to outdo good but endings are better when shoes fit foot size is so vital just to think all it takes is a dance delivery on converted pumpkins eager to deliver costumed load to get an enamored look cinders spark glow in the dark as wood burns ashes fall swept by eons of wind until another glass step catches a heel on a grading the greedy will sweep the ashes of lost acquisitions the simpler will prevail. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-08-2007 08:41 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the greedy will sweep the ashes of lost acquisitions the simpler will prevail. love this one Martin...for many reasons  M |
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Sphinxen Junior Member
since 2007-03-03
Posts 38U.S. |
That was a very interesting piece. I particularly liked, "to get an enamoured look cinders spark glow in the dark as wood burns ashes fall" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed well done Martin |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From fairied tales to reality bites... you did good, m'friend. |
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