Open Poetry #40 |
Yesterdays' "Everlast" |
Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In relative obscurity we dwell comitted to the page and left behind, where once you deemed us worthy of a tell how easily you put us out of mind. As toys outgrown consigned to what has passed, what favor that was curried from your hand gave rise to hope and dreams of "Everlast" undone it seems by tiny grains of sand. Where once we stood impassioned, strong, and loud your hubris leaves us wanting for an ear, anonymous within this growing crowd of tales to gather dust, year after year. Through us to "Everlast" our hopes still cling, yet know, and thus accept what change may bring. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and thus accept what change may bring... that's so true, not much choice but to accept what comes that is not under our control M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doc~ I simply adore the all of this poetic message~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
flows just like a river into sea lovely write! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your hubris leaves us wanting for an ear, anonymous within this growing crowd of tales to gather dust, year after year. Through us to "Everlast" our hopes still cling, yet know, and thus accept what change may bring excessive pride or ambition usually leads to downfalls or tragedy nonetheless, you do examine hope, yet deep sadness gathered round my heart for a deeper loss for both concerned hereā¦ an poignant and deeply moving write |
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