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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-03-05 08:25 AM

Where The Wind Took Me

A trench coat concession set a fire in my eyes
In the wind where once parted, there slipped surprise
To my curious lips, mouthed in exhaled verbs
Concordat swept neckline that such breeze disturbs

Philanthropic intentions by a lash, ruffled fly
On the verge of enigma rustled paradox dry
Toggle opened in falling regalia par none
Blown me over, exploring the paths left undone

The discovery within me raised up heights unmatched
Every nook unmistaken, every cupboard unlatched
In the spy of a smile, though a windy traverse
Every aspect of gale force swept in life’s verse

The crescendo built slowly on a steady uphill
Taking in every moment, full capacity fill
Once the climax subsided, such delight to be found
With just one chance to journey, so my song will resound

Copyright Kkh 3/5/07

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-03-05 01:13 PM

"A trench coat concession set a fire in my eyes
In the wind where once parted, there slipped surprise
To my curious lips, mouthed in exhaled verbs
Concordat swept neckline that such breeze disturbs"

Hummmmm…

I might be reading too much into this but my first inclination was to reply with “Wwhoooo-whoooo, or a whistle.

Enjoyed the view??

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2007-03-06 08:25 PM

This was very good!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-03-08 07:20 AM

beautiful

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-03-08 07:58 AM

I know I read this the other day, because
I looked up a specific word. I'm glad it
came back up so I could say "thank you"
as I failed to respond after the first
reading.

Be well, write more.

K

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2007-03-08 09:02 PM

excellent TD

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2007-03-08 10:02 PM

I am simply amazed at the depth of your imagery and the richness of your vocabulary...fantastic write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2007-03-09 12:25 PM

good read

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