Open Poetry #40 |
your gone face (the michael poems) |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
(the final poem) I know your face by touch when it’s dark I know the profile of your sleeping face the sound of you sleeping ~ Rod McKuen Stanyan Street & Other Sorrows night tries to take you away never I will know your face in the dark long after you leave I will wake to the smell of you move of you inches from me see your profile reach for your face hear you murmur c’mere fit right here next to my heart I will crawl into your warm memory tell you about the man with flannel arms man I love with my soul man who drank coffee from white bone china with leftover roses man who caught me flying too close to folds of lavender time I will tell you about him because you will always be the only one who understands I will reach for your face feel your gone tears hear you whisper I know baby I miss that man too |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the final poem???? no way! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's true Dixie that's the way it ends big hugs to you I know you know this feeling |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes I understand big hugs back |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
it's ok, I'm sure if you feel the salty tinge in your heart... from mine to yours... you are, in a word remarkable. May I be you when I grow? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh I do feel the the salty tinge dear Sunshine and I love you for it you know how often I depended on you we are... well you know |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn it |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
no, no, no, Lady Kate, it CANT BE THE FINAL POEM!! (stamps up and down and causes a flow on effect!!) Please Lady Kate we want more!!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
The flow... the emotion... the impact... stunning. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you my gentle Sir Moonshadow... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You left me with an aching heart - and caught up in the story and the sad beauty of you both. I hurt from the sharing, but I would not trade a moment or a word. Thank you. Alison |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh sweet Dixie please don’t cry doesn’t help Roniece I stamped up and down and carried on and that’s still the way it ended stinks, huh? you know Alison I wouldn’t trade a minute or word either and it still hurts like hell thank you |
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