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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Vague uncertainty hangs like a cloud poised to mask what one seeks to reveal, for the key to unlocking the truth human nature prefers to conceal. Should we open that "Pandoras'" box, face what demons therein may reside? Write it down as one more paradox and, except what the "Fates" may decide? Certain moods may reflect certain days, as the gloom spreads beneath pensive skies. The mind works in mysterious ways too few answers and too many "whys". Almost if as a mind led astray seeks to find through the clouds a true way. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this well done |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wasn't it a wedding gift? (pandora's box, I mean) (I'm pretty sure it was.) Gawd, I think that pretty much explains a bunch, don't you?  Love ya Doc!  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"... The mind works in mysterious ways ..." Self-contradictory conclusions are qualities that sometimes makes my "mind" stick in rewind but still it fascinates me. Interesting write, I was expecting something else from the title ... and I do adore surprises. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
Very nice ~ "Vague uncertainty hangs like a cloud poised to mask what one seeks to reveal,for the key to unlocking the truth human nature prefers to conceal." Unfortunately, the Pandora box is rarely honestly open. Deliberately, people choose to conceal, deliberately choose to deny and then many think they have lived their life willingly, opening a box that they unable to analize its contents. Its frustrating for me. Enjoyed your poem and wisdom here. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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