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Open Poetry #40

The Following Day

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-06-02 06:21 PM

The Following Day

I met her in Elizabethtown.
For fun we went to Churchill Downs.
She told me a certain horse would win,
a horse named "Where Love Begins".
I didn't believe the words she said,
the following day raindrops fell on my head.

JamesLee
02June
2007

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-06-02 08:43 PM

always believe what a woman says

gmcooper
Junior Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 47

2 posted 2007-06-02 09:36 PM

James Michael,

Your lively rhyme and spirit were a joy to read.
A beautiful part of the country. A boy from the midwest, how nice.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-06-02 10:21 PM

wow, beautiful and dancing in the rain? on the bet too?

enjoyed

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-06-02 11:10 PM

Yep, I gotta go with what Dixie said. James, I am loving your poems. Thanks for that.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-06-03 05:50 AM

James... lovely words here RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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