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Open Poetry #40
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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2007-03-02 09:30 AM


dancing radiance of night shadows
darkened by the
luster of knowledge,
walls of connectivity
unfenced by aberrations
of consciousness

the world in stillness
lies in coverlets of hope
awaiting redemption
from misconceptions,
founded on the carnage
of the mind,

battling

echoes of accord in
resonances of disharmony
to make melodies conjoined
with lyrics of liberation…
freeing the past from
the evidence of the future
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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-03-02 09:40 AM

"freeing the past, from the evidence of the future"

Striking line here Steaven.
Enjoyed  reading this.  
Janette
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since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843
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2 posted 2007-03-02 02:00 PM

I often times, too, "battle" with my "luster of knowlege," and as you stated it all so very well it is those "coverlets of hope ... conjoined with lyrics of liberation" that free me.

WOW!  can ya tell ... this one really got to me today!

Excellent write.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same
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