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Open Poetry #40

I never thought

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2007-01-11 02:15 PM

I never thought
I could feel as I do
Love inside
Only for you

I never thought
I could cause you such pain
Yet before my eyes
The truth remains

I never thought
You would be here right now
Searching for answers
Of where, when and how
Where do we go?
from this point we are now
When will we know?
And how do we find a new beginning?

I never thought
That we might not last
But here we are now
With only a past

I never thought
Love could hurt me so much
Transcending the fear
Lost without touch

I never thought
You are part of my sleep
Pressed against me
Wrapped up so deep

I learn here each day
That I needed you more
But I never thought
Not before
You were gone

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-11 09:27 PM

I learn here each day
That I needed you more
But I never thought
Not before
You were gone

Rich... we have something to learn each and every day we breathe

nice writing RDB

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-01-20 12:52 PM

I like this one, the meter is smooth, and you have a consistent vision. I especially like the ending.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2007-01-28 10:15 PM

You tug at my heart with this...it's hard to think about the times we just don't think...and then its too late. Thanks for reminding me to think first.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-01-28 10:28 PM

touching

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