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Open Poetry #40

Whose Heart?

trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-01-11 02:06 PM

Oh mistress mine, whose heart has felt as mine?
For the time is young, and young is to love,
and so it is best, bear thy love as thine-
what lies 'neath your breast, is what I speek of.
So sweet is thy love, may I be thy first,
to delight in forbidden desire?
So unabiding is love to quench this thirst,
to immerse thy soul into passion's fire.
Doth thou not see what love is all about-
for such sweet a thing, to live in this heart,
tho' boundless in nature, it flows throughout-
engulfing souls at rest? Then let not part-
thy tender love, for thy world is a stage,
and thy heart, a player, trapped in it's rage!

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-11 07:04 PM

"sigh" b e a u t i f u l !! RDB

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18

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2 posted 2007-01-11 09:57 PM

You are far too good what are you smoking?
Or mabe you get help from a higher power?

trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2007-01-11 10:15 PM

lol thanks Tom

trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2007-01-11 10:34 PM

Rdb I love your sighs thank you

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2007-01-12 09:10 AM

I've never been much into the type of writing but I like this one

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2007-01-12 11:09 AM

Very beautifully penned Bill.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

trutodaraiders
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7 posted 2007-01-12 11:49 AM

Dixie thanks. For me only being 27 I have read alot of 13th century poetry before i started writing hard to fall away from at times.

Enchantress thank you for taking a moment to leave me a comment. Thank You (:

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