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My Other Half
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My Other Half |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: My other Half You are to me the fairest fair The essence of my hearts ensnare Forever’s piece of magic mist Sealed by kiss that locked the gist You are the holder of my heart That wisp of kiss that was the start I know the moment of this light That burned its way through mind and sight You are the sauce the course and force The very essence of the source You are my love the meaning of The goal and soul of Eden’s love You are the other part of me That gave me wings and set me free You are Pandora of the box That saves me from this paradox You are the distaff of my goal The other half completes my soul |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You are the sauce the course and force The very essence of the source You are my love the meaning of The goal and soul of Eden’s love anima/animus in the flesh wonderful story and so so true Hello Sy, good to see ya  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you love and the top of the morning to ya.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"You are the holder of my heart That wisp of kiss that was the start I know the moment of this light That burned its way through mind and sight" How beautiful this is Sy! It's so good to awaken and read of such a deep love.  &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy Thank you sweetie, :;loveya: too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Thank you dear. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Seymour, you are so sweet. This is a beautiful poem for your other half. I bet she will treasure this forever. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick WEll I hope so we've been together almost 65yrs. LOL |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If you show this to Isabel she might just go on strike  You are the sauce the course and force The very essence of the source Oh, now I get it! You meant that in a nice way right? Not that she is the most petite, wildest little tornado I think I have ever met. We both know she deserves this lovely poem, as boy does she take good care of you! They don't make them like her anymore Sy, so a poem once in awhile is a very wise, and good idea. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are a young wise owl.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... just B E A U T I F U L!!!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Give my hugs to your love, Sy... how special this is! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB, Thank you sweetie. Sunshine, Thank you dear. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I am sure your words lift her heart filling her with the warmth of your love...It is wonderful to read of love such as this and read the words that love inspires...I am glad you posted this one again for all of us to share in the precious love you have for her...**Big Hugs** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you for understanding. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A beautifully tender poem full of appreciation for your other half. How lucky she is ... oh, but perhaps you are luckier to have her as such. Enjoyed very much but, sad to say, from a standpoint of envy. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ahhhhhh ... this is sooo romantic, lucky lady. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Very sweet comment, thank you. Janette, Thank you so much. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
You are the distaff of my goal The other half completes my soul Siyo Seymore Tabin,my brother you give hope to every woman with the open honest love you show the lady of your life,that there are still the magic prince of fairy tales. My heart thanks you that you love her well,and are so proud to say so! my blessings
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wredgranny Thank you for the lovely reply. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"You are the holder of my heart That wisp of kiss that was the start" ahhh Sir Sy how wonderful to remember that wisp of kiss... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady It's something I can't forget. |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
Wow! Enjoyed! That Pandora Box is a kicker for sure. Thin lines between love/hate or need for both and yet a good box to close too with lessons on paths. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RavenSmith Thank you for the read and encouraging reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You are the other part of me That gave me wings and set me free This was definitely penned with an inkwell of love. *S* Beautiful work!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern So nice to see you. |
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