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Open Poetry #40
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he11oxNASTY
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0 posted 2007-02-27 08:33 PM

I feel the demon
screaming
inside of me
And I won't let him out to breathe
  "Spartan", he says
as he colors me sarrow
My seasoned shame burning deeper harrow
  Watch me swallow my pride
He rips and ruptures my walls in spite of me
Yet, I refuse to free
this demon
that dare nest
inside of me
  To thee, I abide
Oh, bitter-sweet treachory
Take away this cryptic devil
that belittles me
Please, pardon my beliefs
to this lewd, crude creature
beside to my retreat

April-Lyn
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1 posted 2007-02-28 11:29 PM

I could feel the bitter-sweet in this piece.

Good one.

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