Open Poetry #40 |
Lake Forest |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. rails disappear into a winter mist melted snow lies in pools along the road another year without her here water drips from wooden eaves . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh John! heartfelt write hugs to you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
well done a very emotional write MORE POEMS, PHOTOPOEMS, AND AUDIO VERSIONS AT http://anthonyarmstrong.multiply.com |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all I don't know what to say . . . John . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
winter drips from wooden eves John, your word art is amazing... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I could hear the melting drops of sadness. Haunting read. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Delicate etching |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you again everyone I'm still surprised. I should write only when the heart is speaking. Thanks all again John |
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