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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2007-02-27 12:38 PM

The city appears so innocent
And for a moment I believe
That beneath the layers of snow
I can erase the memories
Somehow I can forget the filth
And create a world of beauty

And even if I am not enough
Don't tell me I cannot dream
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qN20KgVGSmg

(I totally forgot the title of the poem)

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-02-27 01:28 AM

You write with beautiful simplicity. This poem is as clean as the snowy city you describe. It's beautiful.

A

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2007-02-27 04:50 AM

well penned.
~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-02-27 07:49 AM

keeping this one!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2007-02-27 09:38 AM

Wow thatnk you every one!!!
Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

5 posted 2007-02-27 06:32 PM

You look just like a friend of mine that I haven't seen in a while and your poetry also reflects her personality. Take Care, I like this one alot, you are truely beautiful!!! JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

6 posted 2007-02-27 06:47 PM

I remember the snow well. Sometimes I can't picture it, but you've brought back the emotion it evokes. Elegant simplicity.

Rachael

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2007-02-27 07:00 PM

enjoyed

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

8 posted 2007-02-28 05:33 PM

Dear Juju, the beauty of the world can be created from the beauty of your heart, believe in yourself; believe in people and things will get better. May your thoughts join will all the wishes and dreams created every moment and together unite to make a wonderful world for us all.

Really enjoyed your write my friend, keep your dream and never give up.

Rick

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2007-02-28 07:17 PM

Thankyou for the responces. Rick thankyou.

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-02-28 09:49 PM

You can dream...James

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

11 posted 2007-03-02 08:02 PM

Thankyou james

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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