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wash and wear |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now 
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wash and wear the dust of travel settles into fibers of our fatigued clothes longing for a renewal we are dingy shirts soon plunging together into a laundry of welcome home well wishes as our buttons click silk and flannel entwine seeking solutions now ultra concentrated we tumble and turn agitating with need spinning passionate bubbles of lathered secrets the cycle completes once we acknowledge when following normal washing instructions we are strictly wash and wear Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same " Doing Laundry" rewrite from 12-27-2002 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
All I can say is that I had much to Gain by reading…these words can Cheer, they are Fab…makes you just wanna Shout…which could cause a Trend (and that’s no Borax)…enough to Tide me over for a while…  seriously, nice work |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Steavenr too clever. Jannette, Always I enjoy your writing and perspective. Nice touch. So is this about dirty laundry?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute one |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This brought a huge smile to my face. I loved it. A |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Janette~ This is poetic creativity at it's finest ... to take an idea and work it like you've done makes for a delightful read~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Janette... lovely metaphorical creations for the mind. Much enjoyed!! MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Come and whisper in my ear Give us dirty laundry..." I love this! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Thank you ALL for the replies, and I laughed right along with you. Gosh that feels good. *wink wink* always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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