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Open Poetry #40

Damn the Amnesia

he11oxNASTY
Junior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 27

0 posted 2007-02-24 02:27 PM

Oh, you're
so hardcore.
But it's alright
I'm not fine.
You'd never know
because you never ask.
Damn the amnesia in your veins;
tourniquet of film.
Your love, your love.
I'm above all of it now
only because you told me
"it's nothing personal",
you just hate me.

April-Lyn

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2007-02-25 01:27 AM

hate is impersonal? good write...and welcome to piptalk

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2007-02-25 10:17 AM

"Damn the amnesia in your veins;
tourniquet of film."

Wow ! Great descriptive lines here.
I think words are always "personal" when flung like weapons.

Powerful write ... enjoyed.
And Welcome to Passions.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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