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Open Poetry #40
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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England
0 posted 2007-02-24 12:40 PM



free spirit

thundering of hoofs
freedom’s stampede of delight -
spirit unbroken

Ivor G Davies


The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.
© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-02-24 01:39 AM

Ivor... your words are captivating! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Janette
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since 2001-07-20
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Chicagoland for now
2 posted 2007-02-24 10:08 AM

I adore the brisk quality in this piece.  

It made me think of how difficult it is to capture freedom and hold onto it permanently but well worth the pursuit.

YeeHaw!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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3 posted 2007-02-24 10:22 AM

A stirring and spirited senryu!

Go freely forth with fleet of foot and brave of heart!

Linda
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