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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2007-02-23 08:44 PM

Teach me to dance a waltz,
To lose myself and lead,
Synchronize my pulse
With the music’s beat.
Teach me each single turn
And a firm grip,
So that my hands can learn
Not to let yours slip.
Show me a way to kiss,
Keeping my eyes – closed
And afterwards, savor bliss
Of paradise lost,
To breathe, exhale air,
And again -- from scratch! --
To fall in love, flare,
Melting the snow in March.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-02-24 05:15 PM

I enjoyed this one. We'd all like to learn that waltz.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-02-25 01:28 AM

good to read you again

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-02-25 01:50 AM

oh my yes! I like this!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2007-02-25 10:03 AM

"To lose myself and lead, ...

And again -- from scratch! --" (<------ good one!)

I enjoyed the selfless love of this dance of courtship.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-02-25 11:39 AM

Master~
I always love reading you ... and this is no exception~

There is a beautiful softness to your thoughts in this one~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-02-25 10:34 PM

Enjoyed...James

gohomethx
New Member

since 2007-02-23

Posts 4

7 posted 2007-02-25 11:12 PM

i really liked this poem

Tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms farther.... And one fine morning-

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