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arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

0 posted 2007-01-06 04:43 PM

night visitor

And I asleep,saw my love standing near,
Pale she was,ghost like in the moon light clear.
To my bed she came,and brushed my lips with hers,
To ease my sorrows and steal away my cares.

White was her throat ,so white ,so cold ,so near,
Yet no pulse of her warm hot blood was there.
Her slender fingers to my grieving head she laid,
Cold her fingers,colder than her new dug grave.

Softly she spoke,whispering in my ear,
Soft her voice,softer still her falling tear.
How my poor heart surged with joy;not fright,
My only thought ,my dream,my word-Delight!

arthur

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-01-06 04:46 PM

Nice writing...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-01-06 11:00 PM

"Softly she spoke,whispering in my ear,
Soft her voice,softer still her falling tear.
How my poor heart surged with joy;not fright,
My only thought ,my dream,my word-Delight!"

Well done Michael..
Well done indeed.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-01-06 11:51 PM

very nice writing! RDB

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-01-07 02:25 AM

gave me chills

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2007-01-07 12:05 PM

Well done Arthur!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

6 posted 2007-01-07 12:20 PM

yea i liked the last stanza the most, nicely written and i like your style alot

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

7 posted 2007-02-18 11:49 PM

Very lovely - I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

A

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

8 posted 2007-02-27 05:08 AM

tender~
~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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