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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2007-02-23 07:15 AM

I like my comfort texts from you
They always bring a smile
Sometimes two
Sometimes three
They make me think of you awhile

I like the way you say your words
And end them with a kiss
Sometimes two
Sometimes three
And always more I wish

I like my comfort texts from you
They seem to suit me fine
Sometimes two
Sometimes three
And none have crossed the line

I like the way you take the time
To say the things you do
Sometimes two
Sometimes three
And every word is new

I like my comfort texts from you
I hope you know it’s true
Sometimes two
Sometimes three
Just enough to get me thru…

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

1 posted 2007-02-23 08:03 AM

"And none have crossed the line"

This piece made me smile and also makes me think .. Gee, I might be missing something by not trying "text" messaging. *wink wink*

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-02-23 08:19 AM

I know the feeling of loving those text messages! I'm addicted to the darn things!! Enjoyed the smile in your words here Roniece. Hugs

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-02-23 10:41 AM

big smile here

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-02-23 09:24 PM

"Just enough to get me thru…"

sometimes a little text
is all it takes

love this Roniece

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-02-23 09:55 PM

Enjoyed...James

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2007-02-23 10:27 PM

very nicely done, an extremely pleasant read

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

7 posted 2007-02-23 11:06 PM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
a little link of love has flown
straight from the heart, by mobile phone
to join two souls in virtual bliss
accompanied by a loving kiss
reminders that we always share
the comfort of the one's who care
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Roniece,
In those small moments in time, when a fleeting thought for another enters your mind in a busy day, the mobile has given us the ability to 'connect' in a way that was not previously possible.

Your poetry takes this to it's deepest level and shows that this is also a connection on a level shared by the soul.

Extremely poignant write, if only all would capture 'the moment', whether by mobile phone or otherwise....

Ivor

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

8 posted 2007-02-23 11:12 PM

. . . and I enjoy comfort texts from you!

H, Robert

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2007-02-23 11:47 PM

Oh I like this, the repetition and the rhythm--wonderful.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2007-02-24 03:17 AM

thank you all for your kind comments to my work

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2007-02-24 01:39 PM

I met someone like this. Those comfort texts do help, don't they?

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