Open Poetry #40 |
To My Son.... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I penned these words for my beautiful son just after he was born... he has just recently turned 21 and still my thoughts for him are the same... My Son, How beautiful you are With your long legs and good looks So much like your father in many ways My love grows for you each day So long have I waited for you to Fulfill my life with joy and happiness I hope that you will grow to be strong, healthy and happy with your life And most of all be true to yourself And the loves that surround you Good luck my son As you travel this wonderous maze Called life... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This tribute of love is absolutely beautiful. I am so glad that you have such a person in your life -- and I bet he is as happy to have you in his. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you gorgeous girl...I am very biased of course but yes, he is still my baby at 21! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Good luck my son As you travel this wonderous maze Called life..." I have sons, too, so this touched my heart strings. Good write Mommy! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no matter how many years go by, a mother always remembers those moments lovely gifting here Roniece |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This is so beautiful and special , I have two adults sons , but I did not write poetry back when they were born Hope |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Roniece how beautiful he will always be your baby no matter how old |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone for you kind comments... I'm so blessed to have my gorgeous boy in my life RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ A treasure of a poem written for a treasure of a son by a treasure of a Mom ~ and treasured poet! Warm hug 'n smile, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, what a lovely poem for your son. |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Roniece, this is lovely, and just what I would have expected from you! My sons are both in their 50's and to me, they are still little boys much to their chagrin!! Bea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful blessing for your son, then and forever...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!!! In the midst of winter, |
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