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Open Poetry #40

I Do Exist

he11oxNASTY
Junior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 27

0 posted 2007-02-22 04:09 PM

He opens up his home and his life
He tries to let me in.
Barred behind the blood of being
Just underneath his skin
Pulling toward the pulp of praxis
In which we manifest
Surrounded by the woes of wisdom
Said like they know what's best
Oppression beats the heart of this life
Once all is said and done
But he can rise above us all
To rest right under the sun
How I wish his confidence
Was contagious through his kiss
For everytime he fires entire
Praise by me, I do exist.

April-Lyn

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

1 posted 2007-02-22 05:17 PM

"Pulling toward the pulp of praxis
In which we manifest"

This made me think about how "confidence" takes practice, and at times it is not easy to convey.

Great word usage here, espcially ... "praxis" ... very cool word.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-02-22 06:19 PM

Welcome to our blue pages - I'm sure you will love it here as we do... look forward to reading more of your work ... welcome RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ChaoticHazeLight
Member

since 2006-06-13

Posts 71
California, U.S.

3 posted 2007-02-22 07:44 PM

Mysterious

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