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thought it was you
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thought it was you |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thought it was you standing there so close, so resolute, so strong thought it was you standing there alas, ‘twas a foretaste of longing imagined in the crevasses of fantasy captured on the photo-plates of mem’ry drawn in the substance of hope painted on the canvasses of fancy thought it was you standing there in shadows plain and thoughts sublime thought it was you standing there alas, dark clouds…not silver-lined conjured on the tables of the heart illumined by pure desire engraved on tablets of reflection enlightened by the glow of your essence thought it was you standing there …thought it was you |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
This speaks to me of a longing for an old lover to return. It's deep, and loving, yet hurt at the same time. All in all, I like it. Rachael |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I had to read this twice it is so intense, I have been there, just remember EVERY cloud has a silver lining! Take care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful melancholy |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"alas, ‘twas a foretaste of longing" I enjoyed the anticipation of this heart felt lament. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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