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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2007-01-10 10:39 PM

challenge me to ride the wind with you

    ~ a gentle gentleman

day wind
hurries
business to attend
whips a fury
‘round corners
blowing hats
flying hair
watering eyes

day wind is energy
causing heels that kick
hearts that race

but the night wind
swings a cradle
wisped of wishes
low embers
desire

the night wind
is the wind that rides easy
swelling on moonbeams
hovering dream smelling air

I challenge you
gentle sir
to ride the night wind
hold me
deep
in tender arms
murmur quietly
as I rest my head lightly
on your shoulder
then
let the night wind

take us where it will

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-10 11:03 PM

I challenge you
gentle sir
to ride the night wind
hold me
deep
in tender arms
murmur quietly
as I rest my head lightly
on your shoulder
then
let the night wind

take us where it will

oooh Lady Kate... this is delightful!!  RDB

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2007-01-10 11:26 PM

thank you Roniece
it would be delightful
wouldn't it?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-11 06:39 AM

what a precious thought!

Beatrice Boyle
Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 438

4 posted 2007-01-11 06:47 AM

wow Lady, that day wind really sucked me in...my hair is a mess!

That night wind though, is something to look forward to!

Bea

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2007-01-11 08:15 AM

  Lady Kate.... So lovely....and well written. I will gladly take that challange and show you the ecstacy of the 'night wind'. Come ride with me.

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               Moonshadow
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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2007-01-11 08:17 AM

Inspirations of wind song...

and I'm so glad to see that you
inspired another!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2007-01-11 08:46 AM

Lady
The night wind is the wind of dreams.
I blows a magic carpet of seems.

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

8 posted 2007-01-11 10:20 AM

...mmmmm, soft allure, those wayward winds

sweet challenge and a lovely write!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2007-01-11 12:58 PM

thank you Dixie
may you ride the night wind

Bea I noticed your hair was a little out of sorts

stick with the night wind
so much nicer

Sir Moonshadow
that ride was at once freeing and soul capturing
and oh how you waltz

thank you Karilea

it’s good to have a fellow wind rider

thank you for your sweet words KL

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2007-01-11 04:26 PM

Lady...I have always loved the wind and would ride with it quite willingly if I was a leaf and not me. A lovely poem of heart!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2007-01-11 04:31 PM

sweet Martie
be a leaf for just a moment
it's so perfectly you!

thank you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2007-01-11 06:56 PM

Silky...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2007-01-11 07:02 PM

James... thank you!

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

14 posted 2007-01-12 01:35 PM

Wow...beautifully done, Kate. Inspiring, say the least...

intoxicated,
night wind gently caresses
a fragrant meadow

CG

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2007-01-12 02:33 PM

Kate~
In gently worded waft of wind
you send the words swirling~

BEAUTIFUL~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

16 posted 2007-01-12 03:11 PM

What a "touching" night wind - something to pray for in my world!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

17 posted 2007-01-12 03:26 PM

CG
sweet gently caressing haiku

thank you

hugs to you too Marge

thank you

Honeybunch pray
it can happen!

thank you

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