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Iced Serenity #2
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Iced Serenity #2 |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Iced Serenity, #2  They say, the bigger picture is worth…. whatever [is in your heart] ah, but to me and my heart, yet, and is there a stilled moment, priceless and your eyes would have to be young to see the life in the right middle corner of all that is passing on flight, they are, be it duck, geese, starlings, poets on wing all in search of life. And the rose? The rose came from the sky, and glistened here on earth, the curveways in the ice are but another road for me to follow or fall through, and if the cold doesn’t shock me, then the after life of bliss shall, because in the ice, I see the glints of light, some sidestepped, some a preference of faith, step by step… toward the wall of yet another side. Why do you write? I write… because somewhere within this soul is a song, no matter the adversity, the thorned bird sings… but I pluck each thorn, bleed a little, and with faith, what it is, repair the scattered mess of my life, winged mess that it is. I sing in write, not because I can, but because it might lift you. ~*~ For the love of poets, and special loves, priceless. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Karilea somewhere in the middle of this I found a baobab and a sunset come look at a sunset with me for this is lovely... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank you, SIL, for writing this. I was deeply touched, especially by: "The rose came from the sky, and glistened here on earth, the curveways in the ice are but another road for me to follow or fall through, and if the cold doesn’t shock me, then the after life of bliss shall, because in the ice, I see the glints of light, some sidestepped, some a preference of faith, step by step… toward the wall of yet another side."  ....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
baobab If you see what I know then you know what I see... thank you, Lady. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My very own SIL...you know I don't respond often on my own poetry, but... if what was said left a hole of warm? Then all is good. No, I haven't forgotten anything you have ever said! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Why do I write? It's more than meer song...it's music from the soul. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Oh Sunshine "somewhere within this soul is a song" And we all hear you sing with words and with so much heart. Alison |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful reflection, Sissie... "no matter the adversity, the thorned bird sings…" I'm sure it does. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just beautiful, Karilea! |
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