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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
i would speak not of careless things were i to speak of thee i would not hold common things were i to near hold thee touch me with thy softest touch in the very heart of me lead me gently, smile softly keep me close to thee in the glimmer of the fireplace light or the glistening of the cup as mother nature warms our dreams with weathered snow pristine and dream of that which might yet be in dreams of quietude and dream of that which might yet be together in solitude |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
This is just lovely. Very quiet and yet strong in it's impact. Well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"and dream of that which might yet be in dreams of quietude and dream of that which might yet be together in solitude" ~ I read these lines over and over again. I do so know what you mean ~ and you expressed those feelings very poetically!  Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very sensual appeal to this write. Good thoughts to keep close in mind and in dreams.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Lovely writing! much enjoyed... miscellanea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was dreamy, and took me to a place I have long forgotten, if only for a moment, it was indeed as you described.... profoundly beautiful |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
My, my....I do like this style on you! Very lovely poem, indeed! *hugs*....jo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Steaven, this is lovely! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Particular affinity for natural romance. Enjoyed this. Again. |
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