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Open Poetry #40

The Weight Of Pain

Sunset
Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

0 posted 2007-02-20 04:49 PM

Now and then
like the stirring of leaves come Autumn
A small smile tugs a memory upon me
and I fondly bid you a silent hello

Remembering
Kindness touching the edges of my heart
Laughter raining gently upon my sorrow
A mixture of precious moments
while I held up the sky

Never realizing until long after
You had taken it from me

*Sweet Dreams*
New Member

since 2007-02-20

Posts 9
NSW,Australia

1 posted 2007-02-20 05:15 PM

Perfect!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2007-02-20 05:19 PM

cool write, the way it lilts and lifts, then twists into that heart-wrenching ending...excellent write...

Rod
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 149
Auckland New Zealand

3 posted 2007-02-20 05:21 PM

A single raindrop of regret remains on the windowsill of happiness. Maybe it will never disappear completely.

I really like this. It touched me. Thank you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-02-20 05:25 PM

glad to have you back

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2007-02-20 06:34 PM

Sunset, welcome home. A worthy write, this.
A

, too.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-02-20 06:52 PM

sadly beautiful

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