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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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And I am still not sure about this one...HMMMM understand I stand alone if I can't stand with you understand I stand alone and fade into the black and out of the blue understand I stand alone if your solace I can't be understand I stand alone if a protector you can't be understand I stand alone until you and I are free |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
its not so bad at all standing alone, especially when there is so much unhappiness being together... good one |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I hear you on this one... nicely penned  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"and fade into the black and out of the blue" There is an interesting hue to this piece and a strong message. Enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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