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Open Poetry #40
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
0 posted 2007-02-20 01:22 AM

Craving

Shivers dance
captured in sweeping strokes
of fingers as lips make
erotic suggestions

...

aziza
© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-02-20 01:56 AM

  wonderful! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2007-02-20 07:13 AM

whew....I may need to wait to read 3

uh

nah
MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
3 posted 2007-02-20 07:17 AM

Milady Aziza... Once again few words that pack such emotion and provocation. Incredibly enjoyable. Write on, Milady, please.

          MoonShadow
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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2007-02-20 07:27 AM

ms az, you are opening a doorway
into dark secrets...it is enjoyable
to watch you tiptoeing the stairs
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2007-02-20 08:50 AM

So much said in so few words~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
6 posted 2007-02-20 09:31 AM

whoa, and the romance begins...

enjoyed
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
7 posted 2007-02-20 11:15 AM

Keep it up!!! Love it!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~
SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2007-02-20 11:58 AM

Wow! You sure said alot here, with very few words.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
9 posted 2007-02-20 06:30 PM



yes indeed aziza
keep going...
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