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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
please excuse me for waiting i felt my feelings didn't matter at all something that looked and felt so transparent never knowing feelings long forgotten was something id grown accustomed to to live and die for the moment is the way i decided to spend rainy days there was never enough time never enough darkness never enough light sometimes i feel i have too much time and space constantly feeling lost in this ocean of air we passed the time pretending to know what we were doing living lives that seemed worth living and regretting spending time indoors but now i feel that the blue has gone away and its time to leave this behind lets pretend that dying is not enough to keep us from living lives worth living when the rain falls on the outside |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"please excuse me for waiting i felt my feelings didn't matter at all something that looked and felt so transparent never knowing feelings long forgotten was something id grown accustomed to" whoa...love this part! what a great write  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Naeem, These couple of lines really spoke to me: sometimes i feel i have too much time and space constantly feeling lost in this ocean of air we passed the time pretending to know what we were doing living lives that seemed worth living Your expressions are so vivid and real Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
thanks for your kind words. I'll write an even better one next time, for sure. I want life in every word, to the extent that it's absurd.- The Postal Service |
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