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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2016-01-14 03:41 PM



In the backwoods of my soul,
the part untampered and pristine,
there are clear still waters waiting.
On sojourns inward I have seen them.
I have yet to go to the water’s side
and quench my thirst for serenity.
I have rested and relaxed in the shadow
of the scenic view.
Calmed myself with the knowing
that part of me is true.
Time will impart the paths
to take me where I yearn
to be baptized.
Until that time arrives
I will enjoy my journeys
through the backwoods
and the pathways to water.

LGR©1/14/16

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2016-01-14 06:37 PM


This reads like a prayer, I find your words calming and take comfort in the spiritual nature of your message.

Really nice reading lori, glad I found you over here.  

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2016-01-14 08:05 PM


Thanks Blues!
Thought I'd try a change of scenery. ~L

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
3 posted 2016-01-14 09:50 PM


Nice and easy on the read Miss Lori, every word of it.

So happy all is well.

88's atcha!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2016-01-16 07:22 AM


I will just say one word, dear Lori. This is excellent.


johnthecat
Junior Member
Posts 18
England
5 posted 2021-04-08 01:15 PM


Lovely.

May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb

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