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Daniel James Burt
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0 posted 2012-08-26 03:32 AM


Yes They Are

Damn whispers came again
seeping, insidious, clutching
like quiet, phantom breeze.
Hear, here then gone
slipping away, hiding
not quite, really there?

Enough to drive one mad
whether aslumber or awaken
whispers, quick jerk of head.
Can nary a catch them
they play this hated game
not quite, really there?

Laughing out loud, absurd
proverbial voices in ones head
would be an improvement.
Now they are laughing, mocking
like the edge of fog, slipperly
not quite, really there?

And the treatment for whispers?
straight jacket, padded cell
putting one at their mercy.
Merciless they do snicker
tormenting, banging head on wall
not quite, yes they are...

~~~~~

Daniel James Burt
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Idaho Pen
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1 posted 2012-08-26 03:35 AM


Mr. Poe would be proud of you...this gave me cold shivers, and took me back to someplace I would just a soon not go back to thank you.

Still a good write even if it scares the bejesus out of me.

r v wooo
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2 posted 2012-08-26 12:31 PM


Woodmere...Woodmere...and whispers!
Daniel James Burt
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3 posted 2012-08-26 01:18 PM


that about "wraps" it up RV...snicker
old man pun intended... if memory serves.
me Mrs and i were just talking about this
one and wondering where the 'ell it came from.
these things seem to 'ave a life of their own, eh?

r v wooo
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4 posted 2012-08-30 09:47 AM


Yep! one's perception is one's reality, Daniel...and i'm one that believes every..."thing"... has a life...including poems,whispers and memories.
Denise
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5 posted 2012-09-01 08:17 AM


Good one and it's always good to see you, Daniel!
Daniel James Burt
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6 posted 2012-09-05 09:32 AM


thank you bunches Denise...
tis good to be home again!

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