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Daniel James Burt Junior Member
since 2011-05-15
Posts 45ID |
Dawn Over Easy Dawn over easy glorious, sparkling dew to jewels. Midsummer cool just after sunrise songbirds singing. Chicken lips smiling breakfast served pulled from earth. Windshield mirrored sheet of sunlight draped, dappled. Home porch time cuppa and smoke been over forty. Yesterdays youth mistake laden why the leaving? Yapping powderpuf steaming deposit good morning supper. Cheery g'day genuine neighborly forgotten the nature. People like salt earths flavoring tis good to be home. Long, strange trip indeed has been so dawn over easy... ~~~ Daniel James Burt 8/2012 (all Rights Reserved)  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nice work. Margherita |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
d. j. burt...interesting poem...i love to ponder...and this is a ponder poem. |
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Daniel James Burt Junior Member
since 2011-05-15
Posts 45ID |
ty tyvm guys... yeah rv have been kinda on a quest to make people fill in the blanks with left out words in popular word combinations...no idea where the practice originated. but my chief proof reader gets a kick out of "thinking" the phrase complete instead of just reading it...or maybe i am attempting to channel Hemingway as a poet? i miss Margie as we were working on collecting hiaku's into groupings and structuring them into a relavant single piece. lol kinda like a baseball team, eh? |
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