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r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
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0 posted 2012-08-12 02:22 PM


Come play with me!
Maybe we could skip a rock or two...
this lovely afternoon.

Dear lady, hiding outside my door,
come play with me...
as no other has done before.

Ah, so mute you be...
standing there,
a stealth expression upon your face.

You have the key
to unlock the lock...
releasing the prisoner from inside of me.

I beg of you,
one last time...
come play with me.

Look! the door is open
into a world of dreams.
Now, maybe we can skip that rock...
this lovely afternoon.

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (08-14-2012 09:39 AM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-08-13 06:48 AM


This is filled with joyful anticipation and expectation. May she be in the mood to play!

Very nice and inspiring.

Margherita

Daniel James Burt
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since 2011-05-15
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ID
2 posted 2012-08-20 11:33 AM


ahhh... come play with me. Nice word painting
Idaho Pen
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since 2012-08-20
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3 posted 2012-08-20 12:29 PM


what releasing yourself to another should be,
come play with me. Nicely done

Idaho Pen
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4 posted 2012-08-20 12:30 PM


what releasing yourself to another should be,
come play with me. Nicely done

r v wooo
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5 posted 2012-08-21 11:34 AM


m, djb, and ip...thanks for stopping by.
enjoyed your visits and comments.
i have, also, enjoyed reading your poetry.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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6 posted 2012-08-21 12:13 PM


There is nothing like playing with another
in their playground.
Enjoyed, Ms. E

Daniel James Burt
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7 posted 2012-08-21 06:33 PM


you are very welcome sir... your poetry has inspired me
r v wooo
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8 posted 2012-08-23 10:56 AM


Ahh, inspiration! if only my students had spoken this word...long, long ago. Thank you, DJB.
r v wooo
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9 posted 2012-08-23 05:29 PM


Yes, Ms.E, I agree...it is one of the many pleasures in life...the freedom to express, receive a response and interact with a cordial reply!...thanks for using the key...I enjoyed our moment together...to gather and skip a rock this lovely afternoon.
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