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Daniel James Burt Junior Member
since 2011-05-15
Posts 45ID |
Could This Be Love? Waiting in semi-dark teddy bear delivery first time ever i saw her. Nite drive across Tucson meeting my Yahoo match hugging hello in driveway... wondering, could this be love? Candlelit, fancy restaurant tiny food, steep prices grabbing 7eleven to fill. Shoes pounding on wall motel neighbor complaining laughing as we love anew... Insatiable, this must be love. Special dinner a cooking flowers, shrimp, expectation surprise my hard working gal. Dinner dies horribly as she explodes, angry expecting my confession... Bewildered, this must be love. Clashing, dueling pride neither believing in forever experience teaches us so. Helicopters in the air neighbors interview police oh how we fought destiny... Shattered, this must be love. Broke up, split up different ways and days yet; back together again. Yes we fought it this til death, scary thing fought it, fought it again... Over and over, this must be love. Meeting family, friends winning them all over again we are who and what we are. Thru the tears, fears and joy we remain two as one even as we bitterly fought it... Surrendering, this must be love. Bright, Alabama dawn carving dew laden forest window down fresh, clean. "I'll Fly Away" playing borrowed, brand new Chevy my baby singing, smiling... Certain, this must be love. Moonlight, deep night in the wind, two up free motorcycle engagement ring. Roaring into the stillness catching air and squeals she holds on tight, tighter... Absolutely, this must be love. Three, perhaps four times promises before ministers speaking vows, trembling. Married, married, married anew laughing at the absurdity giving up to stay together... Finally, could this be love? ~~~~~ Daniel James Burt  |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very cool write. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Closing my eyes, To see your face, Hearing your words, Through time and space. So many kinds of love.... That's what thought when i read your work. Altogether, i like it. lots and lots. Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul. |
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