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wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2006-11-07 01:05 PM


you told me
when I walked out of the mailroom
that the exit sign reflected
in my glasses
two red-lettered lights
over vacant eyes

flashing

so, is this a metaphor
.
.
.
I’m just an exit
waiting to happen
or
am I
an empty space
where I just was

and
still the mail meter
churns out 39-cent
first-class red-ink impressions

ker-chunk, ker-chunk

I’m in the mailroom
waiting to be stamped
‘address unknown’
RTS



Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand

© Copyright 2006 Beverly A. Tift - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2006-11-08 05:43 AM


searching for one's place, where one belongs, is such a common occurance in this complex society we toil in. Well done dancer.....again

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2006-11-10 11:30 PM


I liked this.  Your my kind of poet.

(;

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
3 posted 2006-11-13 09:53 AM


searching for one's place, where one belongs, is such a common occurance in this complex society we toil in.

Peg, and yes, we end up in the darnest places...I never expected to be in my 8th year in this office  ***moderately confused***

Juju...thanks for stopping by

Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand

kaila
Junior Member
since 2006-12-24
Posts 37
PA
4 posted 2006-12-24 07:35 PM


wordancer--

I love your energy and your images. You do not overstay your time in each stanza.  Nor do you overstate what you mean. But the message is clear, and you left this smiling reader wanting more.

kaila

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