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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
Bow my head and hit the hay, live to die another day. Come misfortune, come dismay, the bonds now broken, not held at bay. All consciousness fades, my mind betrays. The silent rush comes as I lay, and slowly it all slips away... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Firstly, welcome to Passions, and I can see you will be a wonderful addition. This poem reads almost like a bedtime prayer, and one has to be careful what they wish for it may just come true.  Sad but so very true for some. Well done.Words are weapons, toss them with care. ~ Mysteria ~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I enjoyed reading your poem. Welcome to the site and hope you enjoy it. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A sorrow-filled poem, but one that could be read on many levels... Welcome to Passions! We look forward to more of your writings, so please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Hi Novus_Os... Nice poem! I notice often that the first "rush" of wakefulness-to-dream-sleep is a rehearsal, usually with a startling dream noise of some sort. That wakes one for the real sleep sequence to start. Very animal atavistic... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Great start in our Corner. Welcome and hope you ejoy it. Love, Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (07-26-2010 01:28 AM).] |
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