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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
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0 posted 2010-04-18 03:07 PM



We can say (of love), spirit-fall;
With open eyes – drip;
Breaking spring every day of lies;

As if the life – forgotten drift;
Everywhere here and now into cold night;
That is what we are here for -
This is birth  - the here and now;

Each day we live a little longer, spirit-fall;
One day; so long into cold night;
The angel in after waters all;
Number one – feeling spirit fall;

The things we all cherish;
We live for every day to day - this is the love;
Before long and –after;

This the matter;
Of age and time;
We have lost silent - altogether;

endless,
     infinity.


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2014-01-12 02:03 AM


Time becomes ages, then ages become time to one who holds it in review. A reference tool for historians and a palate for the poet. What a very small increment we are when held against it.

Your poetry is a sign to behold, one that leads in and out in a somewhat esoteric manner, challenging the reader while providing enlightenment.

I found it truly engaging.  

...just bein' Bluesy

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