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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
The baby sky Wore pink and blue- A layette of clouds that grew From a chip of opaque white That traveled through a wispy sight Of black-filled gauze That brushed the face Of Godly realms That finger-traced A night at rest, as was wise, When daylight opened infant eyes. |
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Nicole Victoria Junior Member
since 2010-01-22
Posts 24California, USA |
I love your use of imagry. great job. I really liked it. |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
thank you, Nicole. |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice descriptive phrases here. Nice job Barbara. Love, Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully written, Barbara! Lovely! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beasley, this is wonderful. I am expecting a new grandchild soon...the seventh...and you have captured the imagery beautifully! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Barb: This is so lovely and imaginative! Great work! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I like this. Beautiful and the imagery is fantastic. |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Just read this again and I really love it. So smoothly written. Love, Joyce |
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