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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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cast~off brown~eyed~girl sits in the cemetary both are full of ghosts... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How inventive, dear Shellie! You did choose the right place to challenge those ghosts. But don't ask me to sit there with you and all those ghostly whispers ...  Perfect senryu. Love, Margherita  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, dear 'rita... somehow i knew i would get a reply from my favorite haiku lady... thanks for appreciating this style of poetry... thanks, always, for all of your comments and kind words for me and everyone here you are the best : ) |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Just found this one berney, and I am glad i did. One of my favs of yours. It says so much between the lines which is what a haiku should do. Loved it Yoin |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
shel, This is wonderful writing - I always have liked cemetaries. A |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lots of feelings expressed in a few words. I admire one who can do this. Joyce |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't think I could have said it better ') M |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks you guys! this may be my favorite poem of mine i've always experienced cemetaries as peaceful places. i love to meander through looking at the history and the different periods of artwork on the headstones... in my town there is an historical cemetary that is amazing. back in the oldest part there is a hill with a civil war monument and unknown graves of the soldiers from that war... sometimes i like to just go sit with those gentlemen... thank you all for your comments love, shel don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I enjoyed your poem. My wife and I used to live in Galveston, TX where there are a lot of old gravesites dating back to the storm of 1900- it is interesting to walk through the past. Thanks, Melton |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
melton I'm glad you enjoyed my words and that I'm not the only one who appreciates a walk through the past shel |
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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
3 lines...and i could write a book between those lines just in what they conjured up in my own memory. thanks for a nice piece. zaac |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Shellie, I like that this is both witty and wistful Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
zaac actually...I'm writing a book about all the things between those 3 lines thanks for a nice comment! ____________________________________ michelle thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed it! love, shel |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Yes indeed! You said alot in just a few words. This is a great senryu! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks susie |
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