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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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Moonlight Walk With evening slipping in and street lamps winking on, we walk the main street of our small home town. Arm in arm and with the slow pace that our age will only allow, I watch the snow falling on your now gray hair. With the holiday lights reflecting, you look at me and I realize that even after all these years I still get lost in your eyes. With a boldness of a much younger version of myself, I halt our late night walk, and your endless conversation about your sister, by drawing your beautiful face to mine with these old but still tender hands and stealing a kiss. I smile as I hear that young girl laugh that has never left you and hear you quietly whisper “you old coot” in my loving ear. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
As an oldster myself, I love this. I miss those moments. Tenderly written. Love, Joyce |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you J.J. for your kind words. I am glad you liked it  Yoin 9/11 was a inside job. Ask questions, demand answers. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
My wife and I really enjoyed this post. Thanks, Melton |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Your welcome Melton, I am so glad you enjoyed it Yoin |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love how he breaks up the talk of her sister (and I love the detail in the poem). This is where I want to be some day. Alison |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
I am glad you enjoyed it Alison. Yoin |
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faeriemythc Junior Member
since 2009-06-18
Posts 40KY |
How sweet, I can just see the couple sharing that tender moment. The kind of love everyone is looking for. |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you faeriemythc Yes finding and enjoying a love for many years is a thing of beauty indeed. Yoin |
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HeliaHeart Member
since 2008-11-16
Posts 53Georgia |
That was lovely. That's the kind of tender care everyone hopes to acheive some day... Thank you for sharing. ~Lia |
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