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KatKali
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Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2009-03-03 12:06 PM



Screams echo through the house on a cold winter day,
winds knocks at the windows, houses, and doors,
eight inches of snow cover the ground like a blanket,
no foot steps are present on this harsh day,
Our fight lasting till the sun departs and the night begins,
Matches lit a fire glowing brightly like a warm love,
unlike the emotions in the room, that are so tightly strained,
figures knock to the floor, hit by our handsin an effort to hurt,
It feels like everything is passing slowly by,
My heart is breaking, crumbing though the tears and the pain,
Ending... a door slams shut as you walk out the door,
tomorrow, I know it will be okay but for now I sleep the pain away,
and fall into my fantasy world once again.

© Copyright 2009 Abigail Arnold - All Rights Reserved
KatKali
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Where the wispers grow louder
1 posted 2009-03-03 12:07 PM


You will be seeing alot of poems about Remus and I, as we were together a long time and I wrote quite a bit then, I'll never forget him.

A beautiful Bird,
Perched high

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2 posted 2009-03-07 02:57 PM


I think quite a few of us have had a "Remus" and the ending is always the same.  Nicely written.  It certainly helps to write it out that is for sure.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

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3 posted 2009-03-15 06:37 PM


I do hope he doesn't come back.  Joyce
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