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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2008-10-17 11:35 AM


Time marched ahead relentlessly,
While I was unaware.
I jogged around the corner and
Old age was waiting there.

I didn't want to meet with her,
But had to be polite.
She said she'd like to stay with me,
Perhaps just over night.

I let her come, "Oh, woe is me".
She hasn't gone away.
She brought such heavy baggage that
I fear she's here to stay.

A satchel full of aches and pains
A bag of moans and groans.
She is becoming so entrenched,
I feel her in my bones.

She follows me around all day
And spoils my appetite.
If I escape to early bed,
She awakens me at night.

Take my advice dear younger friends,
Don't stop to say her "Hi".
If you should catch a glimpse of her,
Just keep on jogging by.

By: Joyce 12/17/08





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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-10-17 01:23 PM


This is a fantastic work, dear Joyce, with a right dose of irony.

You made me smile broadly with this one, even though the topic is a serious one!

This should be published.

Love,
Margherita

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2008-10-17 02:46 PM


Thanks Margherita for getting my off beat humor.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2008-10-17 06:59 PM


Well Joyce I have the same visitor but she sure has not put a damper on my appetite, but I sure wish she would.
BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2008-10-17 09:40 PM


I have a friend like that too, and she can be so annoying.  
Oh I try to ignore her, but she's a persistant thorn in my side!
  

This is too cute, and so much fun to read!

latearrival
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5 posted 2008-10-17 10:05 PM


Right on. Love this . "late"
BrokenWinged_Angel
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6 posted 2008-10-26 08:46 AM


Joyce, I just complained yesterday about this unwelcomed guest!  You read my mind before I even formulated the thoughts

BWA~

~Formerly known as Broken Winged Angel~

Life is like a coin.  You can spend it any way you wish, but you only spend it once.

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2008-10-26 08:53 AM


Joyce, I have had an  unwelcome guest this year~~~ I am trying my best to make her leave but I just don't think it's going to happen


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Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2008-10-26 05:50 PM


Joyce, this is absolutely wonderful. I too met up with her and she has now worn out her welcome!!!

ooxx  Marti

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Joyce Johnson
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9 posted 2008-10-30 01:14 PM


I see she has even messed with the date, I wrote this.  It would seem it hasn't happened yet.  Joyce
serenity blaze
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10 posted 2008-10-30 06:17 PM


oh wide smiles, and nods to great advice!

I was just telling a friend that when I welcomed the advent of old age, I had no idea how much aging would be involved.

*tender hugs 'cause tight hugs hurt in cooler weather now*


midnightblues
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11 posted 2008-11-03 04:00 AM


oops looks like you are taking it all very well indeed

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

SPIRIT
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12 posted 2008-11-10 02:44 PM


Absolutely perfect.  I have the same 'roomer' in my house, I just removed the mirrors so I don't have to look at her.

Dinah

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