Two Poems cause they are short

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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-05-24 10:15 AM

Children

Children crying softly,
Wispering names,
To and from.

Snow

Snow falling gently,
Wispering softly,
Danger, Danger.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2008-05-24 12:39 PM

Poems written sweetly
Capturing senses
Well done, well done

Joyce

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-05-25 06:06 AM

It's so important to be able to interprete those whispers. You conveyed your own very nicely!

Love,
Margherita

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

3 posted 2008-05-25 02:01 PM

Great Write! I like the way they parallel each other

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

4 posted 2008-05-26 01:41 AM

"Danger, danger!"......thats it right there. Thats the best line in my opinion because it illustrates the snow so well.

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2008-05-26 10:21 AM

Short and sweet, I enjoyed reading these very much!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

6 posted 2008-09-24 02:09 PM

sweet words gently spoken
with thoughts of many hearts broken
tears fall down along the ground
where the whispers you speak of may surround

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