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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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0 posted 2008-05-21 01:20 PM


Love surrounds this captive heart

I can see it in the air that I breathe.

The spirit of a desire from you to me

And written in the area of my heart.


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-05-21 04:58 PM


Oh, this is very lovely, dear Kimberly!

There is the feel of true love. Enjoyed this much.

Love,
Margherita

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
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2 posted 2008-05-21 05:58 PM


Thank you so much for your reply Margherita

I wrote it when I was in love.  I am going

through my old journals and doing some

spring cleaning and rewrites.

Hugs Kimberly


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